对话的问号放哪里？

放在引号之内，例如 "Where are you going?" asked Tom。

为什么不宜用 very？

把 very messy 写成具体画面，例如衣服铺满地板、书叠在床上，读者才看得见。

小学英文短篇故事写作第二份：对话、细节与时态一致

练对话标点、过去进行式、以具体细节代替 very，并全篇保持过去式。

练习重点　写故事要一路用过去式；描写用具体细节，比加 very 更有画面。

基础Change to the past tense: They eat lunch in the park.
基础Punctuate the dialogue: “Where are you going” asked Tom.
基础Fill in the past tense: At last, the boy ___ (find) his lost dog.
基础Fill in the past tense of “see”: Yesterday I ___ a rainbow.
进阶Which is the better story opening? (A) It was a normal day. (B) The day the river turned red, Mia was still asleep.
进阶Join with “when”: We were having dinner. The lights went out.
进阶Fill in the past continuous: At 8 p.m. last night, Ken ___ (do) his homework.
挑战Rewrite with one concrete detail instead of “very”: The room was very messy.
挑战Fill in: We packed our bags ___ we left the hotel.
错题重练改错：Suddenly, the door opens and a stranger walks in.

题号	答案	一句解说
1	They ate lunch in the park.	eat 的过去式是不规则形 ate。
2	“Where are you going?” asked Tom.	引述的问句问号要放在引号之内。
3	found	find 的过去式是不规则形 found。
4	saw	see 的过去式是不规则形 saw。
5	(B)	具体而带悬念的开头，比空泛的“平常一天”更能吸引读者。
6	We were having dinner when the lights went out.	when 接突然发生的事，前面用过去进行式。
7	was doing	过去某一刻正在进行，用 was/were 加 -ing。
8	Clothes covered the floor and books were piled on the bed.	用具体细节代替 very 一类空泛形容词，画面更清楚。
9	before	先后次序要讲清楚：收拾行李在离开酒店之前。
10	Suddenly, the door opened and a stranger walked in.	叙事过去式要保持一致，opens／walks 都要改过去式。

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