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中四英文：DSE Paper 2 写作（第四份・错题重练）
中四英文：DSE Paper 2 写作（第四份・错题重练）
本分十题修正写作卷最常见的错误：给朋友的信误用 Yours faithfully、中心句要有立场加理由、Part A 200 字占 600 字的 33.33%、段尾要连回主题句、四段 40 分钟即每段 10 分钟、指人要用 who 而非 which、本地前后对比数据最有力、nevertheless 表转折、in my opinion 与 I think 重复、全文一大段令结构消失。
直接答案 写作失分多数不是字汇不够，而是格式、段落与论证结构松散；先修这三项，分数立即稳定。
01 本卷资料（做完才看答案）
| 项目 | 内容 |
|---|---|
| 题数 | 10 |
| 建议时间 | 25 |
| 难度分布 | 基础 4 · 进阶 3 · 挑战 2 · 错题重练 1 |
| 对应章节 | 所属章节：中四英文：DSE Paper 2 写作 |
| 适用年级 | 错题重练 4 题、进阶 3 题、挑战 2 题、综合重练 1 题 |
02 题目（10 题）
- 基础A letter to a close friend ends with Yours faithfully. What is wrong?
- 基础Which sentence is a clear thesis for an essay on school canteen food?
- 基础Paper 2 allows 600 words; Part A takes 200. What percentage of the total is Part A?
- 基础What is the job of the last sentence of a body paragraph?
- 进阶You plan four paragraphs in 40 minutes. How many minutes per paragraph on average?
- 进阶Read: Students which study late perform worse. What is wrong?
- 进阶Which evidence best supports an essay arguing for a later school start?
- 挑战Which linking word signals contrast: moreover, nevertheless or therefore?
- 挑战Read: In my opinion, I think that uniforms are useful. What is the error?
- 错题重练Error repair: a student writes the whole essay as one 400-word paragraph. What is wrong, and what is better?
03 答案与一句解说
| 题号 | 答案 | 一句解说 |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | Yours faithfully belongs to Dear Sir or Madam; a letter to a friend needs a friendly closing | Yours faithfully 只配不知姓名的正式收信人；写给朋友要用 friendly closing，例如 Best wishes。 |
| 2 | The canteen should offer healthier meals because students eat there every day | 好的中心句要有立场＋理由，一句就讲清全文要证明什么。 |
| 3 | 33.33% | 200 ÷ 600 ≈ 33.33，Part A 占三分一，其余三分二留给 Part B。 |
| 4 | It ties the evidence back to the topic sentence | 段尾要收束：把证据连回主题句，段落才有论证力。 |
| 5 | 10 minutes | 40 ÷ 4 = 10，每段十分钟，最后留时间复核。 |
| 6 | Which cannot refer to people; use who | 指人的代词要用 who，which 只指事物。 |
| 7 | A local survey showing attendance rose after the start time moved to 8:30 | 具体、本地、有数字对比的证据最有力；泛泛而谈的常识句不算证据。 |
| 8 | nevertheless | nevertheless 表转折，moreover 递进，therefore 表结果。 |
| 9 | Two opinion markers repeat each other; keep only one | in my opinion 与 I think 同义重复，删一个句子才简洁。 |
| 10 | One block hides the structure; split it into paragraphs with one idea and a topic sentence each | 一大段令评卷员找不到论点层次，要按论点分段并各设主题句。 |
04 做完之后怎样跟进
- 对完答案，只重做错的那几题，并在错题旁写出错在哪一步（公式、单位还是抄错数）。
- 同一题隔两日再做一次；两次都对才可以移到下一份练习。
- 家长只需看答案栏与解说栏，不必逐题讲解。
本卷题目与答案由 TutorZone 团队原创编写，并非任何学校、出版社或考试局的试题；数值与答案均以程式核算。
